Yeah, I’m with you on Every Shot Counts. It felt like the first few chapters were written to tell you how smart you were for reading the book because the system is so good… I think golf books have a tendency to try to sell their narrative to get people to try the concepts in the book, so it’s nothing new, but it definitely stood out!
Sieckmann spends a decent amount of time “tooting his own horn” before getting into actual advice as well… I think it also helps to pad out the word count!